What a brilliant recount Bruce - you have used the perfect structure to shape your reflection so that your audience knows how your day progressed. What was your favourite ride of the day? Mine was the Bumper boats because I got to bump into students and get them wet! (Although they got me back - I was soaked by the end of the ride :-)
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Good recount Bruce, i'm happy you had a good time.
Hopefully we can go on a few more rides next year!
What a brilliant recount Bruce - you have used the perfect structure to shape your reflection so that your audience knows how your day progressed. What was your favourite ride of the day? Mine was the Bumper boats because I got to bump into students and get them wet! (Although they got me back - I was soaked by the end of the ride :-)
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