I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
Monday, 10 October 2016
Suicide Squad
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WALT:Write a poem about something you did in the holiday
Today for the first bit of the day we had to write a poem related to something we did in the holiday and something I did was go to the movie theatre in sylvia park with my sister to watch suicide squad. For my poem I used a few different language features to make my poem a good poem that stands out.
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THANK YOU :)
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Hi Bruce...
I really like how you used a range of different language features they really hook your audience in and make them want to read it.
But maybe next time you could add more interesting pictures and information to make it really interesting.
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