My newspaper article

WALT summarise a newspaper article

Today I summarised a newspaper article called Just a hop and jump for models to K' Rd runway.
This article is based on how models showcased a variety of dresses made by a fashion designer named Miss Crabb's. This event took place on Karangahape Rd and took place on the 24th of August 2016.

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